Rough Cut

Here is my first attempt at editing my music video. I am pleased with it, but have still highlighted some problems/ areas that I would like to improve. There are a few problems I had whilst exporting the video from iMovie. The alarm clock ringing for the second time (before the flashback) and the drums still audible in the background where the drums aren't even in shot- these cannot be heard when the video is watched in iMovie but reappeared on the exported mp4 file. I will try to resolve these issues as I realise these need resolving and don't want this to effect the feedback I get about the rough cut.

I will now ask my classmates to watch and review my video giving any positive appraisals or constructive negative criticisms.